please tell me if you like this and if i should make a comic out of it... also im sorry for all the type-o's... me and my friend RPed this and i wanna make a comic but i wanna know how menny people would read it...

as they where walking a tyrannatair came, "you may not pass!" he growled, eevee and skitty walked forward "we didn't come for a fight
just some apples" skitty said sweetly.
Midnight walk casually into Apple Woods with her loyal parther and best friend Luxray by her side. They were on a low ranked mission
to rescue a Sandshrew. They didn't mind low ranked mission, just wanting to help anyone they could no matter if they were paid high
or low, or rewarded greatly or just not at all. To help Poke'mon is what they did, but also keeping a sharp lookout for treasure.
"Oi, Luxray-Kun..? Wonder what this Sandshrews like..?" Midnight asked looking around the forest before spotting a apple and picking
it up and putting it in her black and purple case around her neck. "Hopefully he won't tug on my hair on the way home..? I don't
think it's worth wasting a Escape orb here." He said walking up to his dark companion.
"Yeah, that's true." She said looking up, hear ears listening to the sounds of the forest, she heard someone talking not to far away.
"Do you hear that..?" She asked. Luxray nodded walking along with Midnight to the sound of the noise and spotting a young Eevee and
a Skitty being stopped by a Tyranitar. "Think they need a  little help..?" Midnight said hiding under a bush, creeping low to the
ground to make sure she didn't get spotted, Luxray doing the same next to her. "Maybe, let's see if they can handle themselves first.
Their also on a mission by the looks of their cases." He whispered back to her. "You sure? That Tyranitar looks pretty nasty..."
"Well, if they need any help we can help." He whispered smiling at her a little.
Eevee then ran in front of skitty " so let us go!" she yelled, but Tyranitar just laughed " Yeah right!" he said whiping his talk
around, skitty moved but Eevee was smashed into a rock. "Hey!' Skitty yowled "leave her alone!" skitty then used iron tail but
missed and Tyranitar crushed her with his foot.
"oh yeah?" Eevee said getting to  her feet and running a full speed tackle attack at him, missing she ran into a tree, tyranitar then
let out a laugh, "you really think you can beat me?" he said grabing skitty and eevee and smashing them into eachother and leting
out anouther large laugh.
Midnight frowned a bit before glancing at Luxray. "You know they couldn't have taken that, he's a rock type... their normal." She
said before leaping out of the bushes running towards the other Poke'mon's aid. "Well I didn't know!" He said before following
quickly. "Iron Tail!" Midnight cried as she stiffened her tail, it growing as hard as iron, glowing a bright white color. She leaped
at the Tyranitar, slapping him in the face with her now super hard tail knocking him towards the ground making him drop Eevee and
Skitty. Luxray started to sprint quickly with a Quick attack catching the fall Poke'mon on his back before landing on the ground.
"Didn't your mother tell you not to pick on kids..?" Midnight said standing a few feet away from Tyranitar, Luxray standing behind
her. eevee growled. "there's a pokemon that needs us to get their item for them" skitty said softly giving a oran berry to her partner, eevee
pushed the oran berry aside and turned to tyranitar. "ill show him" she whispered about to dash off to attack. skitty grabed onto
her partner "no, they will do this for us, now eat your oran berry your hurt." skitty said pushing the oran berry back to her friend,
eevee once again pushed the oran berry back "i'm not some weak egg, i can fight my own battles!" she then pulled away from skitty and
ran and jumped onto tyranitar's back.
she fell off 2 seconds later getting hit in the head. Luxray grabbed Eevee with his fangs gentely holding her by the scruff of fur
around her neck. "No, he's too powerful fo you kid." He said through clenched teeth. "Midnight can take him from here alright...?"
Midnight hunched her back baring her fangs, looking bigger then she really was as her fur bristled as she looked over at Tyranitar
with her with her sharp blood red eyes. "Back off, I don't want to hurt you besides, we're on a mission, so we should be on our way,
alright?" She said continuing gently.
"yes ma'am we are fine, thank you." skitty said gently "Duh! did you think i would lose to someone like him? i would have beat him
if you had no got in the way!" eevee said with rage "i told your friend here already i didn't need your help! "eevee said walking
toward the way they came "c'mon skitty" she said lifting her tail in the air, "eevee that's the wrong way!' skitty said with worry,
eevee then turend around and headed for the other way. " i knew that..." she then flicked midnight's nose with her tail before
replaying herself  in a more dark tone this time, " c'mon skitty..." skitty then ran after her "good bye and thank you!"
Midnight grinned at Eevee's attitude before putting her paw down on Eevee's tail stopping her in her tracks. "A little bit more
respect to the ones just saved you and your friends skins...?" Midnight said as Luxray walked by her side. "You sure you don't need
any help, we could help you guys out. We're on a mission too also."
eevee's fur began to prickle as she sent a glare at midnight, skitty shot then a worried glance before jumping in eevee's back
holding her to the ground, "eevee please!" skitty said, but eevee puched skitty off and jumped for midnight.
skitty grabed her once more just before she reached midnight. "thanks, but no thanks, i dont think that's such a good idea"
sktty said thu teeth and fur, eevee then clamed down... she looked up at them for a moment longer "maybe their right skitty, maybe we
could use some help like you said before, let them come..." "really?" skitty asked "yup" said eevee "but i wanna be leader!"
Midnight looked back at Luxray who shrugged at her not minded what she wanted. Midnight turned back to them before nodding.
"Sure you can be the leader, we don't mind just be careful alright..?" She said smiling down at them. Luxray was thinking though,
why was there a Tyranitar in Apple Woods? They live near mountains not in large forests, something wasn't right about it.